武汉市七一中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
武汉市七一中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编 1．（·北京中考模拟）年 2 月 20 日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。
提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life?
● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。
例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。
2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。请以 One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数 80 左右。
【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以 One thing I felt very proud of 为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。结构清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears 等。
3．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）
Writing.
Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:
1. Some common forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）
2. Some effects（影响）
on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）
3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）
【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, is prevalent in secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others.
John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide.
First, because students spend most of their time in school and it"s the school"s responsibility to protect them and stop any forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校的欺凌事件。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我经历过的欺凌事件的形式，接下来介绍学校欺凌事件对学生的影响，最后介绍解决欺凌事件的方法。此处 as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．（·山东中考模拟）环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于 80。
状况
水污染，大气污染......
应对措施
立即阻止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......
感想建议
环境能够变得更好......
Change for a better China
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well.
But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【点睛】
本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。
5．（·河南中考模拟）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，请你谈一谈，这三年以来，你学习英语的心得体会。
要求：
1.你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟。
2.词数 80 左右。
3.行文连贯通顺。条理清晰，表达准确。
4.文中不允许出现真实校名和人名。否则，试卷按零分处理。
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
短文第一句 Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.开门见山回忆学习英语的记忆。接下来叙述自己遇到的各种学习英语的困难：听不懂老师的英语，记忆词汇短语有困难等等。分别列出，行文流畅。用短语 give up 放弃，表示困难太大，难倒了自己。后来在老师的帮助下，克服了困难。逐步地 Step by step，不断取得进步。
最后一句 In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.对学习英语兴趣的重要进行总结，结束全文。
6．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（A）话题作文：现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。从小保护好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。
内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；
（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。
【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes
The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do 以及 it is adj to do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为"Thank you，my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动．要点如下：
（1）严格要求
（2）耐心指导
（3）热情鼓励；
注意：（1）词数 80～100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称．
（4）…
注意：（1）词数 80-100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称
【答案】Thank you，my teacher!
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）
Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）
Thank you again for what you"ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇抒情记叙文。
【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。
第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因
老师是一个认真工作的人。
老师对我严格要求。
在我考试失利时鼓励我。
第三部分：再次点题，对老师表示由衷的谢意。
高分句型一：
It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．
句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"itis+形容词+for sb to do sth 对某人来说做某事…"结构．
高分句型二：
When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．
句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth 一直做某事"．
提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
8．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。
同学们，从小到大，会有很多不同的人物伴随着你成长，他们可能是你的家人、老师、朋友、同学……甚至是路人。他们或许对你产生了重要影响，进而给你留下深刻印象。请以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 为题写一篇英语作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。
要求：1. 结构清晰，内容完整，语言流利。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校，姓名等个人信息。
3. 80 词左右。
A person who impressed me a lot
【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.
Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life.
I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如 because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now 以及 spend with 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．（·全国中考模拟）中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后,全社会展开了热烈的讨论,某校也就"是否想要个弟弟或妹妹"对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查,请你根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点,问卷调查结果如图所示：
Do you want a little brother or sister?
Do you want a little brother or sister?
For（40%）
For（40%）
against（60%）
against（60%）
1.not feel lonely any more
2.Help each other, share the happiness and sadness
3.……
1.not feel lonely any more
2.Help each other, share the happiness and sadness
3.……
1.worry about parents’ love
2.Bother（打扰）
his/her studying
3.……
1.worry about parents’ love
2.Bother（打扰）
his/her studying
3.……
注意：1.全文字数 90 词左右；
2.条理清楚,书写工整,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确；
3.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
【答案】Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. Different people have different opinions. About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely any more. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents’ choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。内容是某校就"是否想要个弟弟或妹妹"对部分学生进行的一次问卷调查，写一份调查报告，并适当阐述你的观点。时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。人称主要为第一、三人称。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题和所给要点列出提纲，可适当发挥。但短文必须包含有要点。字数应在 90 词左右。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．调查结果；40%支持：不再孤独，彼此帮助，分享喜忧．60%反对：担心父母的爱，打扰学习…
2．你的观点
常用到的重点短语：
get used to 习惯于
what"s more 再者
after all 毕竟
as…as 一样…
本文提纲：
最近，我们学校做了一项关于你想要一个弟弟还是妹妹的调查。不同的人有不同的意见。大约 40%的学生认为有兄弟姐妹是件好事。他们可以互相帮助，一起分享快乐和悲伤。他
们不会再感到孤独了。更重要的是，他们认为他们会得到更多的自由。但其他人不同意。他们认为他们不会适应这种变化。他们也担心他们的父母不会像以前那样爱他们。另外，他们担心新出生的孩子会吵得他们学习不方便。在我看来，很难说有兄弟姐妹是好是坏。但我们应该尊重父母的选择。毕竟，他们是最终决定的人。
【高分句型】
1．Besides，they"re afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．
①that 引导的宾语从句．
②so…that 如此…以致于…，that 引导的结果状语从句．
2．In my opinion，①it"s hard to say ②whether it"s good or bad to have a brother or sister．
①it 是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
②say 后面是 whether 引导的宾语从句．
3．①After all，they"re the persons ②who will make the final decision．
①after all 毕竟，做插入语．
②who 作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词 presons，who 作为从句的主语．
【点睛】
本文思路清晰，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，层次分明，所用句式句型比较高级。书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和高分句式，语言要规范，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
10．（·北京初三）题目 1：
假如你是李华，你们班打算去“希望之家（Hope House）”孤儿院做志愿服务，你打算邀请你们学校的留学生 Peter 参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，你们将在孤儿院做什么，以及他可以做什么准备。
提示词语：gate，play，tell stories，gift
提示问题：
．When and where will you meet?
．What will you do there?
．What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity
【答案】例文 How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.
We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and videos to show.
I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇邀请信，注意邀请信的格式，开头问候，中间部分说正事，最后询问他的回答。本材料给的提示比较多，学生可以按照提示，进行问题的回答即可。注意把相关内容用连接词连接起来，使文章通顺。
【详解】
文章为邀请信，开头问候，点明写信内容，写信是为了邀请你和我们一起参加希望之家的志愿活动。我们将会在周日 8 点在校门口集合，主要活动有和孩子们玩耍，讲故事，赠送礼物等。同时，建议对方做一些事情，可以向孩子们展示一下你的家乡。希望你能和我们一起参加。
【点睛】
本书面表达：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思
连贯，文章具有条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
11．（·天津中考模拟）
作为中学生该怎么度过自己的闲暇时光？你会推荐什么样的放松方式？理由是什么？请根据以下表格中的信息写一篇文章。
观点
理由
一部分同学喜欢网络和电视
1. 放松,信息量大……
2.可以足不出户和同学乃至陌生人互动……
另一部分同学喜欢亲近家人、自然和读书
1. 与家人相处更加和睦
2. 增长见识，开阔视野
你的思考
……（不少于一点）
参考词汇：增长见识 increase one’s knowledge 开阔视野 open one’s mind
要求：
（1）词数：80～100 个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
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【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to
get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.
I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What"s more,we also do after−class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇议论文。以第三人称陈述观点，以第一人称提出思考。主体时态是一般现在时。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
12．（·如皋市实验初中中考模拟）
亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny 收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给 Danny。
要点
内容
历史文化
历史悠久，文化各异；传统节日，多彩习俗（举一例）
文明行为
相互尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）
身边文明
校园文明（自拟一点）
注意：1. 词数 90 词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: civilized 文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明）
of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明）
of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友 Danny 写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。
【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。
【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如 but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。
13．（·富顺第三中学校中考模拟）
朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;
2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；
3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的
要求：
1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密
2. 词数 80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
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【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.
I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。
【点睛】
人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly）
hair / （big/small）
eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用 be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用 like sth./doing sth.best 或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。
14．（·广州市第十六中学中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。
活动
毕业晚会
时间
6 月 28 日晚上七点
地点
学校礼堂 school hall
参与者
全体初三学生和老师
活动内容
1.
邀请校长作演讲；
2.
互赠礼物送祝福；
3.
各班表演精彩节目
4.
要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯;
2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。
3.80 词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
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Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I"m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
15．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是 Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为 My English Teacher Miss Zhang 的短诗。近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。
3.词数在 70 个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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