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　1 JY 作文大法七大类作文 作文中的是 9 个技能 6 个能力 3 个感觉

　skills 技能 driving skill 驾驶技能 writing skill 书写技能 language skill 语言技能 interpersonal skill 交际技能 leadership 领导的小船 领导技能 organizational skills 组织技能 money management skill 金钱管理技能 time management skill 时间管理技能

　 ability 能力 expressing/expression ability 表达能力 social ability 社交能力 management ability 管理能力 zhuangbility 秀 "trouble shooting ability=problem solving ability" 解决问题的能力 a sense of happiness 幸福的感觉 a sense of belonging 归属感 a sense of achievement 成就感

　 一、回信结构及要素：

　邀请信-

　邀请 外教来授课：

　给定问题的 邀请信- 给了 3 个问题 回信时候:

　第一句:招呼，期待和感受 excited + 到的时间，地点，人物 第二句：直入主题，关键的名词 lessons

　第三句：同义改写第一个问题-learn something from your class.

　第四句：同义改写第二个问题-we are most interested in ...

　"第五句：进一步回答信中第二个问题，并且具体化，重点名词。

　customs and culture, especially, peers, movies and school lives"

　"第六句：回答第三个问题，同义改写了第三个问题，并以中外老师做比较，说出两者之间的区别以及期许。

　class activities, great/lively class atmosphere, freer

　 记叙文写作

　作文题目：

　1. 写信给 David 告诉他你暑假干了啥 2. 写信给 David 告诉他你暑期，节日有什么计划？ 3. 写信给 David 邀请他来你家乡参观游览。

　4. 写信给 David 去介绍你家乡的文化与传统。

　5. 写邮件给 David 告诉他你们学校组织的活动是啥 6. 写邮件给 David 告诉他，给他介绍中国传统文化及物品 7. 写邮件给 David 告诉你的一次难忘的经历

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　参观省博 —

　节日吃饭 — 旅行（历史+ 自然）

　节日吃饭类写作：

　时间-分类早中晚饭，4 号晚上饭最重要---family reunion, admire,

　 人物-关系，动机， 6 个人+人物感受 人+delighted

　地点-具体餐厅，餐厅啥样

　开头

　主体

　结尾

　To begin with-To start with...

　Moreover.../Additionally,...besides, ...

　In the end/ finally

　 During the 4 days national holiday, I went to a famous mountain named/called Wutai with my relatives. It was freezing and we were so tired. On the 3rd of October, my mother woke me up at 7 o"clock, but I was struggling for few minutes and I did not want to get up.

　 Then my mother gave me the hot breakfast and I finally got up and started the road trip.

　 My mother said it’s going to take 3hours to get to the Mimo temple, which was on the top of the mountain. On our way up there, she made a mistake and we were so afraid/frightened, because the car was out of control and moving downhill. Financially she stopped the car and we survived.

　 "monk with iphone 7 plus---vegetables white fox"

　和尚

　二、写信模板 框架 - 介绍信- 介绍物品交换的网站给老外 How is it going? 别来无恙？

　1、寒暄，问候 2、写作目的 I am writing the letter to you in order to tell you a website about goods exchange. 我写信给你是要告诉你关于一个 物品交换的网站。

　 3 时代背景 Now, we are living in an information age, in which TVs, cellphones/mobile phones and WIFI/internet are widely spread. 现在我们生活在一个电视，手机，网络广泛运用的时代。

　4 介绍写信由来 One of my friends, in order to help people to have better opportunities for exchanging the second-hand goods/items, so he set up a website of spare items. 我的一个朋友为了方便人们更好的交换闲置物品，所以呢他建立了一个闲置物品交换网站。

　3 5 举例说明好处，益处，打动对方 First of all/To begin with, a lot of people want to use something to exchange some original version of English magazines, for example by using some clothes and plenty of Chineses books and magazines.

　首先，许多人想用东西交换英语原版杂志，比如用衣服或者中文杂志书籍进行交换。

　6 提出邀请 "Would you love/like to share some magazines with us? Moreover/besides, the websites bring convenience into our lives, through exchange, we can have lots of fun,we can also broaden our horizons and make a great number of friends with same interest." 你愿意提供一些书给我们吗？此外，在我们生活中，网站带给我们许多便捷。通过交换，它可以带给你许多有趣东西，从而开拓眼界，交更多志同道合的朋友。

　7 期待回信 I would appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

　 介绍一档电视中国特色电视节目给老外

　Everlasting Classics

　a TV Show/Program 一款电视节目 cultural 文化类的 from CCTV 来自 CCTV Some chinses stars sing the traditional Chinese poems with popular music genre. " 诗 词 与 音乐相结合； 明星和歌手用音乐唱出古诗词" stars like singers, dancers, actors and actress.

　enjoy

　介绍文化-电视节目《经典咏流传》

　1. 问候

　2. 说事儿

　介绍

　我想和你分享一档特别火爆的电视节目，这个节目叫做《》，它是 CCTV 举办一档文化类节目。

　I would love to share a popular TV program with you, which is a cultural oriented show, hosted by SBN from CCTV.

　Some chinese stars sing the traditional Chinese poems with popular music melody and tunes in the show, stars like some singers, dancers, actors and actress. My favorite star is a group named the legend of phoenix, whose performance is called the Invitation to Wine. Written by Libai from Tang dynasty, The Invitation to Wine is about how time flies！

　 R1

　broaden our horizons R2

　strengthen our family ties

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　三、给建议- 健康类 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mary 想知道如何保持健康。请你结合以下建议，就 “How to Keep Healthy”这个话题给她写一封信。

　要点提示：

　"1. 合理、健康的饮食

　 2. 适当的锻炼

　3. 充足的睡眠和休息。"

　注意:

　"1. 词数 100 字左右。

　"

　"2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　"

　3. 开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数

　Dear Mary,

　It’s true that everyone wants to be in good health. I am very glad to give you some advice on how to keep healthy. ……

　balanced and healthy diets 合理、健康的饮食 exercise/do sports/work out 适当锻炼 "adequate/sound sleeping time and rest take a nap" "充足的睡眠和休息 午休" It’s true that everyone wants to be in good health. I am very glad to give you some advice on how to keep health …… 自己的身份-学生，自己的经历和故事 祝福期待回信

　 四、 求职类

　I haven"t seen you for a while. How have you been?/How is everything with you?

　I have seen an ad on your website and I am an exchange student in a certain middle school of London. I am aware that you are looking for some volunteers for the summer camp. I am interested in this position and I would like to get to know more things about it. " 说事儿= 翻译题目和要素 1. 看见广告 2. 有兴趣 3. 想要了解细节" To start/begin with, I would like to get to know when and where the training would be. Besides, is training fee required and what would be my responsibilities/duty as a volunteer. Moreover, if I got the opportunity to work there, where am I going to stay? " 问具体时间，地点，费用职责食宿。

　1 2 3 4 " I am looking forward to your reply and I would be appreciate it if you can offer me this opportunity. 感谢期待

　求职类书信- 暑期教老外学中文 去的目的，原因，动机：

　1. make money

　5 2. show my loving heart to the students. 3. Gain some precious/valuable teaching experience 自我介绍：

　English Name School what do you think about English learning? 个人优势：

　你的计划：

　"unique textbook-simple drawings, e.g verbs with related drawings

　"class interaction/activities- personal experience/stories, group discussion, play some games" "songs and catchy lines to help them to memorize the important points

　总结：

　"summarize all the teaching techniques, before I leave, pass them to the next volunteer. Help others in order to enrich my life."

　 五、 采访类信- 采访老干妈创始人 采访类作文

　文章结构

　"a. who and why(reason1 and reason2) b. his or her career and achievement" p1 his or her influence on me and my inspiration/determination p2 3 questions and why needed to be answered p3

　 The person I would like to interview is Tao Hua bi, who created a special made spicy sauce called God Mother or Lao Gan ma. It is favored by the old and young all around the world. "p1 God mother-special made spicy sauce

　name-Tao Huabi

　favored by the old and young all around the world" I am a huge fan of this sauce, I mean I can not live without it, so are my family members.Whenever there is festival, there is God Mother. Every time when we have guests in our home, my mother always cooks delicious meals/dishes with this sauce and my favorite dish is the fried rice with Lao Ganma. When this delicacy is ready, all the people"s mouths are watering. We all enjoy it and share great time with each other. "classmates, friends, parents and teachers, cousins

　festival meals" "Because LGM always brings me incredible memories, that is why I would to interview her and to get to know how she made it and her life stories.

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　Meanwhile, I already prepared some questions for her, I would like to know how she faced life difficulties and how she overcame them. Since her big success, what changes happened in her life?

　六、 另约时间致歉信 致歉类书信

　 英国朋友 Mark 希望你了解国画的有关知识，原定见面时间，因故需要推迟，请给 M 写一封邮件，说明情况。

　1 、表示歉意及说明原因 因故= 本人，学校，家庭 "I hate to say sorry/apologize, but there is a change in my 本人，学校，家庭。

　 "2 、 重约见面讨论时间 告诉对方你啥时候方便-周末有空； 询问对方你所提到的时间是否合适？ 要求对方回复确定的时间。" "arrange another date to meet/ reschedule the date for our meeting. I will be available on the weekend, how about 9 am of this coming Saturday. Is that ok with you? Will that be convenient to you?

　 If it works out for you, please let me know." 3、推荐先参过国画展览

　recommend/suggest to visit the National Museum to enjoy/appreciate the Chinese Traditional Painting.

　4、可以组织其它活动

　organize other activities.

　 练习：

　"在日常生活中，我们会向父母提这样或那样的要求。当父母没有满足你的要求时，你是怎么做的？请你以“When Parents Fail to Meet Our Demands”为题， 结合自己的一次经历，用英语写一篇 100～120 个词的短文。要求如下：

　1．描述你的经历； 2．谈谈你的感受。

　When Parents Fail to Meet Our Demands"

　 思路：

　同学的观点 "1、爸妈答应好给买东西，结果没买，哭，离家出走--- 不是解决问题，逃避问题" 正经的观点 经历+感受+以理服人---说出对方的逻辑漏洞，说服 ta，提出自己的解决方案 "父母答应你过年，去旅行来放松课业压力（开心）。突然变故，你未能前行。（失望）

　思考：

　1、父母为啥不能带我？

　7 2、父母是否有难处？ 3、我的责任是啥？ 4、我的解决方案和感悟！

　七、 看图写作：

　In the picture, we can see a boy, who is kneeling down and reading some books by the desk. This is a well-known story from an ancient chinese idiom, which encourages us so much. Let me tell it to you /share it with you/

　 第一段描述图像中的人、事、地、物，说明图像的来源，典故和对我们的影响。

　 long long time ago=once upon a time,

　第二段具体开始讲故事以及启发。

　 Long time ago, there was a boy named/called Kuang Heng, whose parents passed away when he was young.He was so poor that he could not buy candles to read books at night/in the dark. He was crazy about reading and he was working at day time and he could only read books at night, but there was no light in the place where he lived. So, he decided to bore his neighbor"s wall to let the light come in. In this way, he could read at night. Finally, he became a success.

　 星期二的时候，我们老师用电脑给我们看了小电影，这个电影描述的是一个男人和一个老鼠的故事。

　 on Tuesday, our English teacher showed us a video clip, which was about a story of a Indian man and a clever mouse.

　 "let sb do make s.b do sth a story of a man and a mouse."

　 在这个电影里，这个男人想要用他姑姑安金达做得美味的面包来引诱这个老鼠出来，所以他把面包放在了夹子上。他站在洞前面，他非常小心的说：“鼠鼠，我为你准备了一个惊喜，出来品尝哦”。但是老鼠很聪明，一开始没有出来。忽然，它像闪电一样出来然后夺走面包，这个时候，老鼠没有被夹到，猥琐的男人的手被夹到了。他气愤地说：“你赢得了这场战役，但是没有赢得整场战争。

　 trap

　 陷阱

　P2 In this movie, the man wanted to use a piece of delicious bread which was made by his aunt named/called Agenda to lure/allure the mouse out, so he put the bread on the trap. He stood in front of the hole and talked to the mouse,"Little mousy, where are you? I know you are there, come out.I have got a surprise for you." But the mouse was so clever that it didn"t come out. Suddenly/Out of blue/sudden, the mouse flashed out and took the bread away from the trap, it ran back to its hole. After injured/hurt/wounded by the trap he set, he shouted/yelled out/screamed,"

　 You may have won the battle, but you have not won the war.

　 "p3

　8 附：

　Hang in there, we are the winners. The victory shall be ours"

　 ambitious

　 好胜心 俺必胜

　A man can be destroyed, but he will never be defeated.

　 Gump Frost said," life is a box of chocolates, you will never know what you going to get." Life if filled up with success and failures, you have to walk on the mountains as well as travel through the valleys. Try your best and never give up. " she has brains as well as beauty. She is determined to carry on with her education."

　 智慧与美貌并存

　 高考写作观点来源口诀：

　四肢.... 丽友全

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