观点表达类写作

　 观点表达类写作 【写作任务】

　现在，很多中学生都携带手机上学，由此引发了一些问题。是否应该禁止学生在学校使用手机，人们对此见解不一。某英文报社就此话题征稿，请你根据提示写一篇稿件简述下列两种观点并表明你的看法。词数不少于 100。

　支持 反对 方便父母和子女联系 耽误学习 提供多种娱乐，如听音乐、上网等 一些学生考试时用手机作弊 【思路点拨】

　1. 审题：本任务是观点表达类写作。

　2. 列提纲：介绍观点通常由三部分组成：

　3. ：

　确定时态、人称：观点表达类写作以一般现在时为主；简述两种观点时用第三人称；介绍个人看法时用第一人称。

　【锦言佳句】

　1. With the development of science and technology, more and more students have a mobile phone of their own. 2. It"s common to see students using mobile phones at school. 3. With mobile phones, parents can get in touch with their children at any time. 4. Mobile phones can lead students to pay little attention to their study. 5. With proper use, mobile phones can be a great help. 【学生习作】

　 With the development of science and technology, more and more students have a mobile phone of their own. Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school? With mobile phones, parents can get in touch with their children at any time. Students can also do fun things on their mobile phones, like listening to music and surfing the Internet. Mobile phones can lead students to pay little attention to their study. Some even use mobile phones to cheat in exams. In my opinion, it"s OK to have mobile phones at school, but schools must have rules about using mobile phones, for example, when and where to use them. With proper use, mobile phones can be a great help. 【习作点评】

　本篇习作完整、详细地阐述了两种观点，在表达自己的看法时简明扼要，并给出了建议，所用语言精练、通顺，很好地完成了写作任务。

　但是在介绍两种观点时缺乏主题句，未能将段落大意进行总结或概括，不符合英语文章的行文特点。

　【习作改进】

　With the development of science and technology, more and more students have a mobile phone of their own. Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school? Some people give a yes answer. They say with mobile phones, parents can get in touch with their children at any time. Students can also do fun things on their mobile phones, like listening to music and surfing the Internet. Others are against the idea. They say mobile phones can lead students to pay little attention to their study. Some even use mobile phones to cheat in exams. In my opinion, it"s OK to have mobile phones at school, but schools must have rules about using mobile phones, for example, when and where to use them. With proper use, mobile phones can be a great help.

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